TOEFL Writing(4) These days, raising children is less difficult for parents than fifty years ago.

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Some people think that raising kids is really hard these days.

 

Today, it's easier for parents to raise their kids than it was 50 years ago. This is because parents can get help from the government and find useful information.

 

Raising kids is easier today because parents can get help from the government. It costs money to feed, clothe, and educate children, but governments help parents with these costs.

 

For example, the Korean government has a free daycare system. Kids under five can go to day care for free. This is great for families with young children because it allows both parents to work outside the home without having to pay for expensive services. This makes it easier to deal with money problems that come with having kids.

 

In short, today's parents can get help from the government and access helpful information. It's easier to raise kids now than it was 50 years ago.