TOEFL Writing(14) Imagine that you have received some land to use as you wish. How would you use this land?

주제에 대한 예시 답안입니다. 알아두면 좋을 주요 어구는 굵은색으로 표기하였습니다. 

 

Our country has limited access to cultural facilities and playgrounds for teenagers. Therefore, if I were to receive land for the purpose of personal use, I would establish a cultural facility for teenagers. Consequently, they have the capacity to shape their own culture. There are several other reasons why I wish to create a culture facility for teenagers.

 

Our country has limited access to cultural facilities and playgrounds designed for teenage use. It has been observed that adolescents tend to frequent similar locations, such as a singing room. Consequently, teenagers develop a sense of fatigue regarding these outings. Adults often perceive these spaces as being more suited to teenagers. If I were to receive a parcel of land with the objective of developing a cultural facility for teenagers, the presence of juvenile delinquents within the community would be significantly reduced. Similarly, adolescents have the opportunity to shape their own cultural identities within these communities.

 

Next, I would transform it into a multifaceted space that combines the elements of recreation and learning. Consequently, adolescents with a penchant for reading can indulge in literature to their heart's content. Reading extensively is crucial for developing emotional intelligence and social skills. However, recent studies indicate that teenagers are not reading as many books as they used to. By visiting cultural institutions, they can develop a regular reading habit. Therefore, I would establish a reading area within the cultural facility.

 

This cultural facility will have a positive impact on teenagers' social development and human relationships. They have the opportunity to expand their professional network. Additionally, they can gain insights into human relationships. Furthermore, they have the opportunity to cultivate a sense of empathy and concern for others.

 

In summary, our country has a limited number of cultural facilities and playgrounds for teenagers. Consequently, they have no place for their pleasure or satisfaction. The establishment of a cultural hub catering to adolescents would be a judicious initiative. This hub would serve as an environment conducive to the exploration and cultivation of their own cultural identities, the pursuit of intellectual growth through reading, and the development of social skills.